I Pop the Question

heart’s palpitations

dozens of ruby petals

and me… thorns and all

Written for The Haiku Challenge from Ronovan Writes. Requirements: Haiku has to include the words heart and petals.

6 thoughts on “I Pop the Question”

prettyflyforawhitemom says:

October 25, 2016 at 5:57 am

So sweet!!

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1. rogershipp says:
  
  October 25, 2016 at 6:30 am
  
  Thanks
  
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draliman says:

October 25, 2016 at 7:34 am

Nice contrast, with the petals and then the metaphorical thorns.

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1. rogershipp says:
  
  October 25, 2016 at 9:39 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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Jade M. Wong says:

October 25, 2016 at 2:45 pm

Loved this!! Love the contrast between the petals and the thorns. Really clever the way you worked that in there!

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1. rogershipp says:
  
  October 25, 2016 at 4:28 pm
  
  Thanks for the read!
  
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