“Teddy, the storm is getting worse.”
“Don’t worry, Alice. We’re safe here. Many a night my brother and I laid out in front of this cavern and counted shooting stars.”
“But the picnic, it’s ruined.”
Teddy reached around her waist. Alice trembled. He wasn’t sure if it was from the rapid drop in temperature brought on by the storm, or whether fear had overtaken her because of the mighty streaks of lightening enlivening the clouded skies.
With Alice nestled in his arms, Teddy was in heaven. Could there possibly be a better way to spend the evening than watching this celestial extravaganza play out before you… complete with a percussion symphony?
Spying the well-supplied, dry wood and chips in the back alcove, Teddy moved to light a fire.
With the fire ablaze, the cavern’s walls danced. Shadows from the elongated stalactites created silhouetted-pairings, gracefully waltzing.
While not the original plan, Teddy wondered if this new opportunity was not a far better idea.
Teddy lay the wadded lawn-blanket by the fire. Taking Alice’s hand, he settled her.
Before cowardice could dissuade him, Teddy dropped to one knee. “Alice, tonight was supposed to be a night we could tell our children about…”
Written for Sunday Photo Fiction. Requirements: Create a 200 words flash Fiction story using the given photo prompt.
Awww, so sweet. I wonder if she says, “Yes.” Great story, Roger!
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If she doesn’t … that storm is going to be a long wait!
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hahaha!
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Beautiful! Such a romantic and unusual backdrop for a proposal.
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A man’s gotta do what a man’s gotta do?
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He deserves a YES for originality and creativity alone 🙂
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What a great story, Roger! God obviously had better plans for the proposal setting than Teddy.
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I believe so!
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A marvellous setting for a proposal! Fingers crossed…
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Wonderfully written! Oh, I love the romantic turn of events and I bet it’ll be a lovely story to tell for their future kids, too. ❤ 😀
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Thanks for the kind words and the read!
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My pleasure. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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What a sweet story. And how dramatic a background for his question. Well done.
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Wow!! Not only did you show in your words nature’s fireworks but a the couples fireworks.
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Thanks for the kind words.
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Opportunity indeed knocks once
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Beautiful sweet story. Well told. 🙂
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Lovely story, Roger. I hope she says ‘yes’. 🙂
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That will definitely be a story to tell their children. I also hopes she says yes.
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Thanks for the kind comments.
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Excellent 🙂
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