THE TIRE SWING IS GONE
The tire swing is gone.
The knotted rope as well.
We haven’t been for a picnic there since that day.
No more Frisbee. No more croquet. No more nights with the telescope just hoping to see the rings of Saturn.
David was eleven. I was only seven.
But I still remember.
I still visit.
I have to.
It is the only place that I can still hear his voice.
I can still see David in the uppermost branches … Shouting down to us that he was Superman.
But he wasn’t.
I think that I believed that he was Superman, too.
Written for Sunday Photo Fictioneers. Requirements: Using the photo prompt, create a flash fiction story of 200 words. (This one was only 100.)
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A tragic tale. A very emotional piece.
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Full of emotion and also love. Feels very real. Well written
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Thanks.
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It’s sad that she can not get over the death of her brother after many years. She goes to the scene of the accident to keep herself consoled with the thoughts of him and his voice.
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If only kids were as invincible as they believe. If only
Good piece Roger.
Tracey
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Thanks so much for reading and for your comments.
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Tough on the ones left behind.
I thought the structure of the piece really helped with your story – slow, deliberate and thoughtful.
Good one.
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Thank you so much for the read and the comments.
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woof, that’s good Roger – powerful piece and poignant last line
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Great story Roger. At a certain age kids feel invincible, in their innocent minds all things are possible. Growing up robs them of that special power.
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Wow! Great story but so sad. 😦 I found myself wanting to yell at David, “NOOOO…” Great story Roger!
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Thanks for your passionate following! It is so appreciated!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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You painted the picture very well. You can see him standing there looking. Great story
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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