SHARON???
“Didn’t want to leave. No real choice.”
“I hate you. I never want to see you again.”
“I don’t know if she meant those words or not. But once words are released, they’re hard to get back. She didn’t even try to get them back.”
“I’m going for a drive. When I get back, I don’t want you here!” SLAM!!!
“The conclusion was pretty easy to understand? I packed. Get out. Don’t bother looking back.”
“I was lucky to get the ticket. Good thing the final fight was payday.”
HONK! HONK!! HONK!!!
“Sharon?? What the devil does she want now?”
Written for Friday Fictioneers: Requirements: Create a 100 word flash fiction story from the given photo prompt.
For some reason I’m imagining that this sort of thing happens a lot in that house!
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I hope they work it out!
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As Oscar Wilde said, “The proper basis for marriage is a mutual misunderstanding.”
Enjoyed your story! Thanks for stopping by my blog!
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Thanks for all the comments! And the read!
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The message was pretty clear! Love the dialogue.
Lily
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Thanks for the comments and the read!
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I get the feeling Sharon does want him to leave after all. Great take.
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Thanks so much for the comments…. and the read!
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An emotional rollercoaster; that’s what she is. I like this story — I’ve had a good time digesting it. Thank you!
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That’s for the comments and the read!
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I think Sharon’s opening up the whole can of worms, again. Good job Roger.
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Great story Roger! That Sharon sounds a bit temperamental 😉
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YEp!
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Sounds pretty normal.
Did he really say “What the devil”? No wonder she’s pissed off.
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Actually… He was thinking it?
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Dear Roger,
I’d say Sharon’s pretty clear. Although maybe her honking is second thought?
Shalom,
Rochelle
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That’s what I thought… But I don’t think he is up for any more chances??
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I think Sharon had forgotten it was his payday. There’s no way she could let him leave with a full check.
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Agreed? I hadn’t thought of that as the reason for a quick reconciliation!
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Just get on the bus!
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Yep! You got that right!
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I have a feeling, it’s Sharon who has to make a choice this time…. I have a feeling the narrator might stand his ground this time
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He should get on the bus anyway. She’ll send him crazy – and he’s already invested in the ticket. Fun story.
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I think so too.
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He must forgotten to put the toilet seat up?? LOL – some people want to be take seriously but ask not to take anything they say (in anger) seriously…Sharon must be one of those.
Nice story.
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Thanks so much for reading!!!
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He really should get on the bus. Even if she wants him back, there’s a bit more to do than honking after these outbursts.
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Yep… there is!
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Bad decision, should have taken the subway instead. Nice one.
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Thanks for the read!
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After reading the comments, Roger, I gues the pay check may have had something to do with her changing her mind. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I suspect!
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Sorry about the word “guess” with only one “s”.
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You could maybe write your own song, Thank God and Greyhound, I’m Out of There?
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I think we have a hit!
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